Meli. I liked your similes, while I was reading it, I could create such a calm and beautiful mental picture. Your poem transmits sweetness and peace.♥ Caro
I can see everybody agrees on the feeling we get while reading the poem. I think that was Meli's idea to create a peaceful mind state on the reader. But that peace is, in the second stanza, quite broken as the feeling of an icy-cold shower runs through our body but then that same feeling is softened thanks to the third and fourth stanzas. When we reach the end of the poem we can feel calm again.
Meli, I like your poem! I like the way you use your imagination with the words, so the alliteration appears, as well as the símiles. But the most I like is the final word "wish" . It carries a special symbol. Moni
Loved the similies, loved the images. It's like an old Celtic lullaby...
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ResponderEliminarHi Meli!! I could feel that I was in a fairy tale looking at everything you have described. I really enjoyed it!!
It reminds me of a Japanese haiku: subtle and profound. Loved it!
ResponderEliminarMeli. I liked your similes, while I was reading it, I could create such a calm and beautiful mental picture. Your poem transmits sweetness and peace.♥ Caro
ResponderEliminarI can see everybody agrees on the feeling we get while reading the poem. I think that was Meli's idea to create a peaceful mind state on the reader. But that peace is, in the second stanza, quite broken as the feeling of an icy-cold shower runs through our body but then that same feeling is softened thanks to the third and fourth stanzas. When we reach the end of the poem we can feel calm again.
ResponderEliminarMeli, I like your poem! I like the way you use your imagination with the words, so the alliteration appears, as well as the símiles. But the most I like is the final word "wish" . It carries a special symbol. Moni
ResponderEliminarThank you all for your beautiful comments!! My idea was to create a sort of aesthetic relaxing atmosphere. I'm glad you liked it!
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