I really like the part when you say: "Those who hate each other sometimes love each other. Those who love each other sometimes hate each other". The first part reminds me of childhood when we said "those who fight love each other", it was really funny. The second part is stronger but sadly thre are situations like this. I really like the poem.
Both Love and Hate are powerful and extreme feelings: they need the same passion, obsession, intensity. It's a thin line between them. I don't know if we could choose between to love or to hate someone. What we deeply feel inside is what we are able to give. Love your poem mate💜
Rama, I like your lyrical poem! You´ve shown your deepest feelings in it. Also, you used a lot of semantic figures like metaphor, epiphora, and anaphora. You chose Love, the best decision ever!
Nice views! I agree with Marce when she says what we deeply feel inside is what we are able to give. Sometimes feelings are so mixed up that we end up having strong confrontations, as Ramiro states in his poem, deep inside and to make a decision becomes unachievable.
Hi Rami! I really like the way you have described Love but the part that I like the most is when you said: they have known themselves for years and despite the problems they have remained together. you didnt write these words exactly but I could get this message.
I seem to have skipped your poem, Rami. Sorry. I can't say more than what it's just been said about your poetic resources. I loved your similies and metaphors! They're the perfect picture, making tangible what is meant to be seen. I felt that the anaphora on the 9th & 10th lines, are the peak of a climax, ready to exhale in the peace of mind you resolve the strain in the 11th line. May be that's just it. A simple struggle between what's good and bad, what's right or wrong, what is to love and to hate... Isn't it that, what life is all about?
I seem to have skipped your poem, Rami. Sorry. I can't say more than what it's just been said about your poetic resources. I loved your similies and metaphors! They're the perfect picture, making tangible what is meant to be seen. I felt that the anaphora on the 9th & 10th lines, are the peak of a climax, ready to exhale in the peace of mind you resolve the strain in the 11th line. May be that's just it. A simple struggle between what's good and bad, what's right or wrong, what is to love and to hate... Isn't it that, what life is all about?
Who's gonna break the ice?
ResponderEliminarRamiro, I liked the way you depicted the intensity of both feelings.
ResponderEliminarThanks meli! As you can see, I am passionate about feeling something with someone hahaha.
EliminarI agree with meli! The metaphors are really strong so is easy for me imagine the feelings you wanted to express
ResponderEliminarI'm aye
EliminarI think It is so clear and expressive that It makes the poem easy to understand...
Eliminar* It is easy for me to imagine ..
EliminarI really like the part when you say: "Those who hate each other sometimes love each other. Those who love each other sometimes hate each other". The first part reminds me of childhood when we said "those who fight love each other", it was really funny. The second part is stronger but sadly thre are situations like this. I really like the poem.
ResponderEliminarI'm Anto
EliminarHahaha. I agree with you. I am glad you liked it!!!
EliminarBoth Love and Hate are powerful and extreme feelings: they need the same passion, obsession, intensity. It's a thin line between them. I don't know if we could choose between to love or to hate someone. What we deeply feel inside is what we are able to give. Love your poem mate💜
ResponderEliminarMarcela, I always loved the way you explain everything...
EliminarI think It is about that, to receive in the same measure of what one gives.
Thanks!!!
I'm Marce!
ResponderEliminar*There is a thin line ...
EliminarRama, I like your lyrical poem! You´ve shown your deepest feelings in it. Also, you used a lot of semantic figures like metaphor, epiphora, and anaphora. You chose Love, the best decision ever!
ResponderEliminarThanks moni! :)
EliminarYes! I tried to incorporate some of them.
And LOVE is something I always like to talk about!
Nice views! I agree with Marce when she says what we deeply feel inside is what we are able to give. Sometimes feelings are so mixed up that we end up having strong confrontations, as Ramiro states in his poem, deep inside and to make a decision becomes unachievable.
ResponderEliminarThat's it!!! What a great comments! I like it because we exchange interesting ideas.
EliminarThanks teacher!!
I loved how you could intertwine two feelings as powerful and antagonistic as love and hate.
ResponderEliminarRami, I can see that you've used many similes, antithesis figures and some anaphora figures. I loved it, it's very nice :)
ResponderEliminarHi Rami! I really like the way you have described Love but the part that I like the most is when you said: they have known themselves for years and despite the problems they have remained together. you didnt write these words exactly but I could get this message.
ResponderEliminarI seem to have skipped your poem, Rami. Sorry.
ResponderEliminarI can't say more than what it's just been said about your poetic resources. I loved your similies and metaphors! They're the perfect picture, making tangible what is meant to be seen. I felt that the anaphora on the 9th & 10th lines, are the peak of a climax, ready to exhale in the peace of mind you resolve the strain in the 11th line. May be that's just it. A simple struggle between what's good and bad, what's right or wrong, what is to love and to hate...
Isn't it that, what life is all about?
I seem to have skipped your poem, Rami. Sorry.
ResponderEliminarI can't say more than what it's just been said about your poetic resources. I loved your similies and metaphors! They're the perfect picture, making tangible what is meant to be seen. I felt that the anaphora on the 9th & 10th lines, are the peak of a climax, ready to exhale in the peace of mind you resolve the strain in the 11th line. May be that's just it. A simple struggle between what's good and bad, what's right or wrong, what is to love and to hate...
Isn't it that, what life is all about?