You're such a sweet mother, my dear... The sweetness of your similies make even possible to read the lines in a different way, rounding up your feelings in the very same idea: "Love of a daughter, Love of a son, both enlight my life". The anaphora you used end in the same blinding light. All consuming, birth giving in the fire of love. Again, I repeat myself...you're such a sweet mother.... <3
Moni, your poem is as sweet as you are. I love the way you described this special love, through your similes and semi anaphoras, because your "children's" love is the most powerful of all. Love it, love you♥
Moni, beautiful poem. While I was reading this poem, it seems that I was listening to you. I know the immense love that you feel for your daughter and your son, that's why I really like your poem. They are the engine of your life and there are no better and clear words to describe them.
Moni, you've used simple words which create great similes and depict deep feelings, the ones I'm starting to understand now. Also, the parallel ideas presented in the first four lines show that no love is stronger, they are equal and enlight you in the same shining way. Well done! Congrats!
You're such a sweet mother, my dear...
ResponderEliminarThe sweetness of your similies make even possible to read the lines in a different way, rounding up your feelings in the very same idea: "Love of a daughter, Love of a son, both enlight my life".
The anaphora you used end in the same blinding light. All consuming, birth giving in the fire of love. Again, I repeat myself...you're such a sweet mother.... <3
Este comentario ha sido eliminado por el autor.
ResponderEliminarMoni your poem is really beautiful!! It expresses the love you feel very clearly! Loved it!!
ResponderEliminarThanks mates, friends!
ResponderEliminarMoni, your poem is as sweet as you are. I love the way you described this special love, through your similes and semi anaphoras, because your "children's" love is the most powerful of all. Love it, love you♥
ResponderEliminarHi Moni! your poem expressed a huge love for children. This love is so powerful and unmatched. I can understand perfectly!! loved it.
ResponderEliminarIn such a simple and sweet way you have depicted what sons and daughters meant to a mother. Knowing you, It couldn't be otherwise! Loved it :)
ResponderEliminar*mean
EliminarMoni, beautiful poem. While I was reading this poem, it seems that I was listening to you. I know the immense love that you feel for your daughter and your son, that's why I really like your poem. They are the engine of your life and there are no better and clear words to describe them.
ResponderEliminarMoni, you've used simple words which create great similes and depict deep feelings, the ones I'm starting to understand now. Also, the parallel ideas presented in the first four lines show that no love is stronger, they are equal and enlight you in the same shining way. Well done! Congrats!
ResponderEliminar