Soul, heart and mind...what a hard threesome to connect in one loving feeling, my friend! Your inversion on the first stanza is marvellous! I love the imagery, and the similies at the end...as light as the first love. <3
Very nice poem Juan! I agree with Paul, your inversion is brilliant, also the use of anaphora and comparisons are great. Your openness to love is very sweet and joyful ☺
I agree with Meli! What a great resource! I loved your poem and the way you employed the semantic elements, you have accomplished a great piece of writing :)
Juan, this poem shows us that at last you ´ve found your love! Beautiful poem, I like it
ResponderEliminarSoul, heart and mind...what a hard threesome to connect in one loving feeling, my friend!
ResponderEliminarYour inversion on the first stanza is marvellous! I love the imagery, and the similies at the end...as light as the first love. <3
Juan, I don't know if it was your intention but I really like how the end is completed with the title. Lovely poem!
ResponderEliminarVery nice poem Juan! I agree with Paul, your inversion is brilliant, also the use of anaphora and comparisons are great. Your openness to love is very sweet and joyful ☺
ResponderEliminarI agree with Meli! What a great resource! I loved your poem and the way you employed the semantic elements, you have accomplished a great piece of writing :)
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