Anto, beautiful poem! You used figures like anaphoras and metaphors in it. The most that I liked is the first line in the second stanza: "I walked into love with you".
"to walk into love with someone"...well that's an expression I'd never thought of before. Your imagery is so beautiful, that the whole work is a field of flowers. Similies, metaphors and anaphoras combined to match the very sense of a heart in love. To love someone over the ages of time or through all dimensions, must imply an endless amount of love and selflessness. That someone, being that evelasting song that tunes your life up.....what a precious feeling! I loved it! <3
Anto you are very romantic! I really like your poem, I think it doesn't only express what love is but also it reflects hope and desire. I find appealing the way you played with similes, anaphoras and the different senses. Finally, I agree with Meli, 'I walked into love with you' is my favourite part and I think it's the climax of your loving poem♥♥
Anto, beautiful poem! You used figures like anaphoras and metaphors in it. The most that I liked is the first line in the second stanza: "I walked into love with you".
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Eliminar"to walk into love with someone"...well that's an expression I'd never thought of before. Your imagery is so beautiful, that the whole work is a field of flowers. Similies, metaphors and anaphoras combined to match the very sense of a heart in love. To love someone over the ages of time or through all dimensions, must imply an endless amount of love and selflessness. That someone, being that evelasting song that tunes your life up.....what a precious feeling! I loved it! <3
ResponderEliminarAnto, what a beautiful poem!! I agree with my classmates. 'I walked into love with you' is my favourite phrase of the poem.
ResponderEliminarAnto you are very romantic! I really like your poem, I think it doesn't only express what love is but also it reflects hope and desire. I find appealing the way you played with similes, anaphoras and the different senses.
ResponderEliminarFinally, I agree with Meli, 'I walked into love with you' is my favourite part and I think it's the climax of your loving poem♥♥
What a beautiful journey for a woman in love! You're images are so clear that I could feel that love too. Loved it Anto! <3
ResponderEliminarSimiles, metaphors ! Imagery, we can feel all the senses through this beautiful poem about love !!!!
ResponderEliminarThank you very much for your nice comments mates!!! ❤
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