Paul, I love your poem! You always uses descriptive phrases instead of a simple one. This poem is full of periphasis , as well as metaphors. As I always tell you, you write in an amazing way! 🤗
Hi Paul. I agree with Moni, you write in an amazing way.Your description about loneliness is full of metaphors, full of feelings and of course full of passion. I can imagine you standing and reading it, acting with the same passion that you wrote it.
Dear Paulys, I love your poem because It's very touching. You've used so strong words to express what loneliness is for you and I totally agree with your interpretation. As regards the semantic analysis, I can see that you've used Anaphora (Let's, loneliness); "Loneliness is mean" could be an example of personification. Simile (violent and sharp as a high-pitched string). Consonance and rhyme (anxiety, perplexity, insanity) Hope my analysis is ok! Lovely poem♥
Wow, Paul! Such a powerful poem! It reminds me of a Poe's story, in which loneliness make men go insane. Loved the musicality of the similes, you can almost hear the music while reading!
Paul, wonderful poem!!! I like a lot the descriptive phrases you use to describe loneliness, it is full of feelings. And as Moni said, you write in an amazing way. You are a genius! I love it!
Paulo, your descriptions are full of intense feelings. Thanks to your similes we can materialize the abstract feeling you've described "Loneliness". While reading we can experiment states of comfort and despair, and that's what life is about. I've also noticed the great amount of semantic figures you've used. Some of them have been already mentioned by your classmates, I can add parallellism, figura etymologica, tautology, periphrasis and hyperbola. Congrats!
Paul, I love your poem! You always uses descriptive phrases instead of a simple one. This poem is full of periphasis , as well as metaphors. As I always tell you, you write in an amazing way! 🤗
ResponderEliminarPaul, I agree with Moni. Your poem is amazing!! I really liked the end. As well as in Ana's poem, it makes you feel like you can overcome anything
ResponderEliminarGood metaphors to describe loneliness. I could get the intended message. I agree with your perspective of loneliness !
ResponderEliminarHi Paul. I agree with Moni, you write in an amazing way.Your description about loneliness is full of metaphors, full of feelings and of course full of passion. I can imagine you standing and reading it, acting with the same passion that you wrote it.
ResponderEliminarThank you all guys for the nice comments!
ResponderEliminarDear Paulys, I love your poem because It's very touching. You've used so strong words to express what loneliness is for you and I totally agree with your interpretation.
ResponderEliminarAs regards the semantic analysis, I can see that you've used Anaphora (Let's, loneliness); "Loneliness is mean" could be an example of personification. Simile (violent and sharp as a high-pitched string). Consonance and rhyme (anxiety, perplexity, insanity)
Hope my analysis is ok! Lovely poem♥
Wow, Paul! Such a powerful poem! It reminds me of a Poe's story, in which loneliness make men go insane. Loved the musicality of the similes, you can almost hear the music while reading!
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EliminarPaul, wonderful poem!!! I like a lot the descriptive phrases you use to describe loneliness, it is full of feelings. And as Moni said, you write in an amazing way. You are a genius! I love it!
ResponderEliminarPaulo, your descriptions are full of intense feelings. Thanks to your similes we can materialize the abstract feeling you've described "Loneliness". While reading we can experiment states of comfort and despair, and that's what life is about.
ResponderEliminarI've also noticed the great amount of semantic figures you've used. Some of them have been already mentioned by your classmates, I can add parallellism, figura etymologica, tautology, periphrasis and hyperbola. Congrats!