I agree with Monica and I was thinking how difficult it may be to give a single feeling attributes of duality. It's like thinking: "No matter how hard life can be to live, I'll get over this and be happy at all costs". As Aye's masterpiece, it made me feel like going from darkness, all the way into the light.
Ana, I liked the way you used similes and metaphors to describe the feeling of loneliness in two very different forms. Both of them made me feel strong emotions. Very nice poem!
I like your poem a lot Ana, the way you show the two different sides of loneliness is wonderful. With both faces of loneliness I felt identified in some aspects and that's s why I liked it to much. My favourite phrases: "Loneliness is sadness as a person waiting for a loved one at a hospital" I can imagine that. "Loneliness is a good dream like a new begining" always new beginnings are good, I think. Beautiful!
Ana, I can see a parallel structure in your poem formed by the two octaves presented which show two different perspectives at the same time. Loneliness is duality according to your words and I agree. Chossing the second octave to be the one with a positive meaning you've clearly made the choice of leaving the reader a sense of comfort.
Anabella, your poem is full of similes! You´ve described the loneliness in different ways. I like it
ResponderEliminarthanks Moni!!
EliminarI agree with Monica and I was thinking how difficult it may be to give a single feeling attributes of duality. It's like thinking: "No matter how hard life can be to live, I'll get over this and be happy at all costs". As Aye's masterpiece, it made me feel like going from darkness, all the way into the light.
ResponderEliminarThanks Paul!!
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ResponderEliminarAna I liked how you talked about loneliness from different perspectives. I agree with Pau, it gives you the feeling you can overcome anything
EliminarThanks Meli!!
EliminarAna, I liked the way you used similes and metaphors to describe the feeling of loneliness in two very different forms. Both of them made me feel strong emotions. Very nice poem!
ResponderEliminarThanks Caro!!!
EliminarAna, loved how you have depicted both faces of loneliness, the bad and the good. I always thought that it's an underestimated feeling. Loved it :)
ResponderEliminarI like your poem a lot Ana, the way you show the two different sides of loneliness is wonderful. With both faces of loneliness I felt identified in some aspects and that's s why I liked it to much. My favourite phrases: "Loneliness is sadness as a person waiting for a loved one at a hospital" I can imagine that. "Loneliness is a good dream like a new begining" always new beginnings are good, I think. Beautiful!
ResponderEliminarAna, I can see a parallel structure in your poem formed by the two octaves presented which show two different perspectives at the same time. Loneliness is duality according to your words and I agree. Chossing the second octave to be the one with a positive meaning you've clearly made the choice of leaving the reader a sense of comfort.
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