Wow, Sole.... Your imagery is a privilege. I believe your words unveil the mere circle and cicle of life in its full extent. Powerful self-perception is clearly depicted in the comparison you can sense among every line of the poem when reading. Clearly, life is a celebration in your words or at least it should be! The anaphora as a resource of reassuring an idea, as the multiplicity of choices you bare inside are delightful. Thank you for this piece of art. =)
Beautiful words Sole! What can I say about it, is that I agree with my mates. You wrote it in a lovely manner. Pretty images appeared in my mind while reading it, because of your imagery!
Hi dear! I agree with my classmates, you have a wonderful imagination. When I read your poem , I could imagine the flowers behaving as you described them but even more I could allow myself see them as people too. I loved it.
I agree with my classmates! You have written the amalgam between nature and humans in such a delightful way! Loved the metaphors, you are a great writer :)
Sole, you've depicted a beautiful scenario and transmitted a relaxing and calming atmosphere with your words. The duality expressed is very well represented in the romantic metaphors you've chosen. The last couplet makes us feel positive and hopeful. Well done!
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ResponderEliminarYour imagery is a privilege. I believe your words unveil the mere circle and cicle of life in its full extent. Powerful self-perception is clearly depicted in the comparison you can sense among every line of the poem when reading. Clearly, life is a celebration in your words or at least it should be!
The anaphora as a resource of reassuring an idea, as the multiplicity of choices you bare inside are delightful. Thank you for this piece of art. =)
Sole, I agree with Paulo. Your imagery is really beautiful. I really liked the lines "hot can be cold" and "rain can be warm".
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ResponderEliminarBeautiful words Sole! What can I say about it, is that I agree with my mates. You wrote it in a lovely manner. Pretty images appeared in my mind while reading it, because of your imagery!
ResponderEliminarSole, I really enjoyed reading such vivid imagery. I fully agree with your outlook on life and nature. ♥
ResponderEliminarHi dear! I agree with my classmates, you have a wonderful imagination. When I read your poem , I could imagine the flowers behaving as you described them but even more I could allow myself see them as people too. I loved it.
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EliminarI agree with my classmates! You have written the amalgam between nature and humans in such a delightful way! Loved the metaphors, you are a great writer :)
ResponderEliminarSole, beautiful poem! Many images come to my mind while I was reading. And as my classmates said, you write in a lovely manner. I really like it!
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EliminarSole, you've depicted a beautiful scenario and transmitted a relaxing and calming atmosphere with your words. The duality expressed is very well represented in the romantic metaphors you've chosen. The last couplet makes us feel positive and hopeful. Well done!
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